Life isn't easy
its not a walk in the park
you can't just say "I'm famous and fluttery"
no, Life is hard
Its stressful and complicated
thump, thump. stress triggers a headache
for the time being all lifes mysteries may be shaded
but when they reveal themselves, be prepared to shake
Life is an ever changing valley
Life is a road less traveled
Life is a mystery in every alley
Life is a ride less held
Life is amazing, true, ispirational and unpredictable
So before you get upset and into a great strife
i know this for a true fact its unequivical
That its all just a journey, its all just Life.
This is really good. It's well written and really inspirational. I don't really have suggestions for improvement, but maybe just the capitalization. Oh, and happiness is spelled wrong.
ReplyDelete1) ABAB
2) Thoughtful and encouraging
3) Inspirational, unpredictable, unquivical
4) Someone striving to make it through a tough situation.
5) Didn't see any..
6) Inspirational and unpredictable STANZA FOUR LINE ONE
7) Life's mysteries may be shaded but when they reveal themselves. STANZa TWO LINE THREE
8) Thump Thump STANZA TWO LINE TWO
Amanda