Walkin' in a forest,
Feelin' like a tortus.
Wantin' some McDonald's,
'Cause my name is Ronald.
I was hungry as a bear,
And I did not care.
What it was I ate,
I couldn't even wait.
And then I walked in the cave,
My torch held high.
I didn't even wave,
To the friend close by.
The walls of the cave,
Seemed to whisper to me.
They were not paved,
And were as tall as a tree.
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And as for the roof,
It always went poof.
It was like the sky,
When I looked up high.
And in the back there's a rack,
with all this food.
And there's a giant pack,
With all this wood.
It is getting late,
My mommy might get mad.
I cannot make her wait,
Or things will get bad.
Ya mcdonalds
ReplyDeleteIt was like the sky
Whys your mom gonna get mad?
You find more words to rhyme
1 AA BB
2 To Happy
3 Mcdonalds is a cool word.......paved is cool but it doesnt make since there
4 Torch held high
5 My mommy might get mad
6 In a back there was a rack
7 hungry like a bear
8 poof
The Adam Shaw
sometimes i feel like a tortus
ReplyDeletesometimes i feel like a hungry bear right before lunchtime
this is great i have no suggestions
1.A,B,A,B
2.hungry!
3.tortus, hungry, mcdonalds
4.giant food pack
5.mommy might get mad (line 26)
6.in the back there was a rack (line 21)
7.the cave whispered (line 14)
8.it always went poof (line 18)
Nathan Bolles
1) It is about food mainly.
ReplyDelete2)Why would your mom get mad?
3) Why are you in the forest wanting mcdonalds?
4) Why dont you just get some food?
Feeling like a tortoise
Hungry as a bear
As tall as a tree
It was like the sky
1.It was about food and a cave.
ReplyDelete2.Why were you so hungry?
3.I also wonder why your mom would get mad?
4.Why didn't you bring food with you to the cave?
Seemed to whisper to me
Feelin' like a tortus
And were as tall as a tree
The walls of the cave
A cave- Dark,wet,scary,cold