Buzzy Buzz Buzz goes the fly with the fuzz.
Boomidy Boomin Boomin what the heck am I doin
I hate to rhyme these lines
Cause It's wastin my time
They call me little Yeezy cause my rappins so cheezey
Makin these rhymes makes my stomach feel queezy
But It's really easy
Cause they got books on it in the libreezy
My shoes are as green as a frog
I really don't wanna type on this blog
I'm black as the night....
Naa i'm just kidding I'm white as the light
My pencils' pretty yellow
But so is my cello
Under my umbrello
Ello ello aye aye aye
I enjoyed how funny and creative it was
ReplyDeleteYou should wriite more because it was funny and having all of the peom requierments
1) NONE
2) happy, calm, and funny
3) Buzzy buzz buzz, Boomidy Boom Boomin, and white as the light
4) black as the night
5) buzzy buzz buzz
6) rhyme these lines
7) shoes green as a frog
8) Naa
Zac Leombruno
It was funny and awesome.
ReplyDeleteIt was kind of short and not all the requirements.
Rhyme scheme: A A B A A B A A B B
Poets tone is funny.
Interesting usesd of diction were fly with the fuz, white as light, and green as a frog.
Imagery was fly with the fuz.
Alliteration: buzz buzz buzz, line 1.
Internal rhyme: buzz buzz buzz goes the fly with the fuzz, line 1.
Personification: None
Onomatopoeia: Buzz, line 1
Liam Numrich
I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE your poem Lucas!!!!
ReplyDeleteThe tone is super funny.
But you wouldn't even have this amazing poem if it wasn't for ME, Elaina Smith, zoey Vlasuso, and Mr. Patrick. :)
I like your choice of rhyming words.