Basketball is like love
Its hard to stop
Great even if you get a stove
Just like a cop
You feel like you can pick the world up
With pressure, hardwork, and clutch
Its not like baseball where you have to wear a cup
You dont really have to do much
My favorite part is when I hear the swish
I do it alot
Its just like getting a good wish
Kind of like getting the right slot]
The basketball talks to me when I play
Basketball is the best bet
It may be bettter than clay
I don't treat the other team like my pet
I love to play basketball and can relate to that.
ReplyDeleteI also like to hear the swish.
Needs more imagery.
Needs a better theme.
1. A,B,A,B
2. Loving
3. clutch, swish, presure because it describes the thrill of the game.
4. A ball swishing
5. Getting a good. Line 11
6. NO INTERNAL RHYME
7. NO PERSONIFICATION
8. Swish. Line 9
Bayan Razzaq
1. The poem is about the game of basketball.
ReplyDelete2. Why is basketball the best bet? Line 14.
3. Why is basketball a love that is hard to stop, and why do you associate it with a cop? Stanza 1.
4. What drives your love for basketball, pressure, competiton,...?
Basketball is like a love.
Just like a cop.
It's just like getting a good wish.
Kind of like getting the right slot].
Love- passion for the game, something that drives you forward, pure fun from the heart.
Bayan Razzaq
1.The poem is about the game of basketball.
ReplyDelete2.You don't really have to do much? Line 8.
3.Why don't you treat the other team like your pet?
4.Why are you so crazy about basketball?
You feel like you can pick the world up.
Just like a cop.
The basketball talks to me when I play.
It may be bettter than clay.
Basketball- 3 point shots,boxing out,rebounds,screaming fans