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Perfect Perfection
The road is like a big decision
Leading in different directions.
Dont know which to take,
It ends, in a big collision.
Ever thought of perfect perfection?
Lions and tigers sjubting at the sight!
Choosing always the right direction.
Everything, you have to make,
As the world around starts to crickety-crack;
Cats and dogs appearing from the overhead blue,
Quickly, everything becomes so fake.
People are the morning sun,
Shining so brilliantly from above.
This is what we call perfect perfection,
The world will stay, filled with choices
Just like froot loopes;
Different colors everywhere.
I liked how you used the word "froot loopes" and the title of "Perfect Perfection".
ReplyDelete1. rhyme scheme- A B B A
2. The tone is mysterious because the person doesn't know whicj path to take.
3. diction- "sjubting", "crickety-crack", and "froot loopes"
4. "...the overhaed blue.."
5. perfect perfection in line 5
6. will stay, filled
7. the road leads in different directions...
8. crickety-crack
Katie Stapleton
I love the "cats and dogs" part!!1
ReplyDeletesmae number of beats in each line in the first stanza?
1.ABBA
2.mysterious and reflective
3.'sjubting","collision", "fake"
4.'Lions and tigers sjubting at the sight!"
5. perfect perfection,line 5
6.will stay, filled line,15
7. Leading in different directions line 2
8. crickety-crack line 9
Hunter Montgomery
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ReplyDeleteThe peom seems to be about a death, but going to a brighter place may be heaven. I don't have a question about any line in particular. One question I have is what made you want to write about this? I also don't have a question about a particular stanza I understood them pretty well.
ReplyDelete-Similes were..stanza 1 line 1, stanza 4 line 5.
-Direction..choices, roads, toughts, hard, decisions, thinking.
Emma:)
1. The poem is about making decisions and trying to be perfect.
ReplyDelete2. One question I have from a particular line in the poem is in line 6, "lions and tigers sjubting at the sight" of what?
3. One question I have about one particular stanza of the poem is, what is the rhyme scheme of the last stanza.
4. One question I have about the entire poem is do you always strive for "perfect perfection".
a.The road is like a big decision.
b.People are the morning sun.
c.Just like froot loops.
d.NA
"Quickly everything becomes so fake"
Fake- plastic, imitation, not genuine, a lie
Mady
Why did you describe the road as a big decision?
ReplyDeleteAnd why did you use lions and togers to sugest perfect perfection?
Emma:)